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Go ahead. I give you permission, if that's what you need. Write whatever you wish, even if you don't know a thing about it. Find out. Learn it. Study it. Do the necessary research. You'll only benefit from this process. Don't ever let anyone tell you, "You can't write about that if you don't know anything about it. If you've never been to a certain place, never visited or seen it how can write about it?"
It's called research, and there is a wonderful thing called the Internet which cuts down the time intensity by hours, if not days, not to mention the enormous expense saved on traveling and accommodations. However, you must be sure to check all your sources. As a staff writer who contributes interviews and articles for an internationally distributed magazine, I must always confirm my sources. It helps to avoid any embarrassment later on to myself and the magazine. I also check other sources besides the Internet. Libraries offer online databases, but it doesn't hurt to take a trip to the building and check the shelves every now and then. Also, speaking to people regarding your subject matter is equally important. Interview people who have actually been there, done that. You will get a sense of the culture and the colloquialisms. Immerse yourself into this project. You might find it to be fun and enthusiastically recharge your own writing prose. When I begin a new writing project, I make a list of persons, places, things, I can research, get in contact with, or go visit. When I wrote "Rescue in the African Congo," still unpublished, I interviewed people who had gone on several mission trips to the area. I had a Scottish captain who played the bagpipes as one of the main characters, so I researched bagpipes and found out a lot of interesting things I didn't know. I found a local bagpipe society in my area and went to interview them, listened to them play, studied the different parts of the pipes and how they are played. I researched about the breed of dog I chose to include as a companion for the captain and interviewed a breeder to find out about the temperament and habits. I researched about traveling in the Congo. How to get there. Where to go. What is the terrain and weather like at different times of the year. I researched about gorillas (apes) and learned about child armies. This opened my eyes to a whole new world I wasn't aware of at all. I've never been to Africa and quite possibly never will go, but I think I know enough about it to write a pretty compelling novel. Someone else who has written an entire series of novels, which has since become one of NY Times bestseller's of all time, is Diana Gabaldon, author of "Outlander." She never set foot on Scottish soil before writing a word of that novel. ('nough said.)
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Sleet, snow, and nothing but cloudy skies. As I sit here on my couch in the middle of the night, my insomnia has me listening to the sleet tapping against the window. What is it about winter that keeps me from wanting to write? Do I have a seasonal disorder? No, I did just have back surgery though. So that's a good enough excuse I guess. As I recline comfortably on the couch, laptop propped up by my knees, I am also watching a marathon of Pillars of the Earth. This is a great series. No, I haven't read the book. I prefer to watch instead of laboriously muddle through the pages. My eyes tend to tire out quickly, which is bothersome to me. I wish I could read more prolifically, but I have to reserve my reading habits for more astute educational materials and edit other people's writing. Reading for pleasure is simply difficult for me. I do a lot of reading and editing of other writer friends. Some of it's pretty good, but I find most people who ask for my help do not know the craft nearly as well. And I do not consider myself that good of writer either. I've just been doing it a bit longer and have paid attention to developing skills more than they. In that respect, I tend to get the writer blues. I find it discouraging to read junk and then struggle to find the words on how to tell my friend they write utter junk without hurting their feelings. That is just impossible to do. In such cases, I simply don't say. If they insist, I attempt to be kind in my choice of words. However, this isn't direct enough for most folks who simply don't get my round about way of thinking. Yet if I dare be too direct, I come across harsh and cruel. It's a catch 22 of sorts. How to say it without really saying it, but saying it clearly enough so they can benefit from my gentle critique. Some people have a thicker skin than others, but many newbies are thin to the core. I was there once myself. I understand this your baby. But this baby needs to learn to crawl and then walk and then eventually start to run, yet remain within a safe distance of a parent's watchful eye. The writer must be willing to submit to a mentor's watchful critique in order to learn the craft and write well. Here is my angst. Writers who do not care to learn and hone technique and skill. They only want to see their god awful words in print. They consider themselves God's gift to the world and the words of course were given by Him anyway so why touch a thing. They are perfect just the way they are written. And this my friends is exactly why many writers stop writing. They can't take the rejection. They won't do the work. Instead they rush to write their inspired words in a first draft and throw it out on the internet for the world to see. Like what I'm doing now. Normally I'd never bear my soul in such a raw way. Some may prefer this style better. I hope it serves a purpose. Winter is lonely and beautiful at the same time. Sometimes it's ugly and then all together lovely, just like writing. In the loneliness, we find our true voice for writing. In the despair of rejection, we see the ugly for what it is and, if we persevere, we learn how to write better until the voice is clearly heard. Just when my discouragement is about to get the best of me, out of the blue comes a contract offer for a sequel to Candy Moon. This gave me a much-needed shot in the arm, the B12 of confidence I needed to keep going. If you are discouraged with your writing today, I pray you will find encouragement and the fortitude to keep going. Perseverance is a gift of the Holy Spirit. I pray you will receive this gift. I am so excited to finally announce the release of my new children's picturebook. Lighthouse Christian Publishing announces the release of “Candy Moon,” a new children's picture book. This newest work by Londa Hayden offers a realistic and practical answer to parents who struggle with keeping Christ in Christmas for their children. What is the true meaning of Christmas? A question not asked often enough in this world of high-tech materialism. Candy Moon is a charming and endearing story that carries the theme of giving to those less fortunate. Parents and children alike, ages preK through third grade, will experience riding along with the Thompson family on their way to help a family in need, and their children realize the joy of giving.
This timeless children's picturebook offers vivid illustrations by renowned artist and cartoonist, Nick Nixon. Bright colors light up each page from the toy shop train to Grandpa sharing the story of Jesus birth and a glowing candy moon at the end. The carefully crafted wording gives older children ease in reading to their younger siblings and friends. The familiar scripture of Christ birth, reminiscent of A Charlie Brown Christmas, is also included. A children's book of this nature is long overdue, and one surprisingly not available before now. In a world where traditional values are challenged, Candy Moon fits well as a classic family favorite. Nick Nixon owned and managed a graphic design studio, which employed a full time staff and four artists. His thriving business served local, national, and international clients for 35 years. Since retiring, Nick has concentrated his talents on cartoons, writing, and illustrations. His humor columns and cartoons have appeared in various publications. He offers to do caricatures for patients at area cancer treatment centers and housing facilities for their families. Nick also reads stories to children during day care programs at his church and provides copies of custom drawings related to that day's book for a coloring activity. Helping out at special family events such as birthday parties for his thirteen plus grandchildren and looking after his loyal companion, Gracie the wonder dog, keep him busy. However, he imagines himself a legend in his own mind while attempting to play golf, in his words, “a most humbling game.” Londa Hayden is a native Texan now living in beautiful Tennessee with her husband and three sons. She studied music at East Texas Baptist University. Her experience in the medical field gave her the opportunity to volunteer during the Katrina crisis, which inspired the children's book Candy Moon. Londa is the founding president for Bartlett Christian Writers, and a staff writer for Southern Writers Magazine. Her memoir Date, Pray, Wait inspired a blog by the same name which offers Christian dating advice. Even though Londa has been happily married to Steve, her first and only husband for almost three decades, she believes a healthy couple never stops dating. She hopes her golden years will bring lots of grand-babies and camping trips to inspire more fun children's books. Find more publications by Londa on her websites at http://londahayden.com and http://datepraywait.com. Candy Moon will be available at bookstores everywhere soon, but for now, you can purchase online at http://Amazon.com, http://londahayden.com, http://lighthousechristianpublishing.com. To order a signed copy, please contact me at [email protected]. Stay tuned for Booksignings in our local area soon to be announced. To leave a much appreciated review on Amazon.com, here is the direct link: http://www.amazon.com/gp/offer-listing/1502853590/ref=tmm_other_meta_binding_new_olp_sr?ie=UTF8&condition=new&sr=1-6&qid=1413818953 Thank you so much. Have a very Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Whoa! I didn't see this coming, but I'm sure glad it did. "Jasmine in Bloom" made the top 15 finalists in the Fraiser Contest, which is headed up by award winning author Susan May Warren. I couldn't be more excited about this. Especially since it came on the heels of the worst rejection I've ever received for my work. I was so discouraged, I wanted to just throw the whole manuscript out. Seriously, I was thinking perhaps I wasn't a writer after all. I was just kidding myself. This was just the shot of confidence I needed to keep going with my dream. Thank you My Book Therapy for your constant support and encouragement to writers who want to put their best work out there.
I've been working on children's books for years. My first effort came through the inspiration of a poem I wrote to help educate small children on the AIDS pandemic in Africa, titled "In the Savanna." Learning how to turn a 16 line poem into a children's book was no easy task. I managed to find some great photos online, which were royalty free and public domain. Then I found Blurb.com, which offers a great and very user-friendly book building program. Since I wanted to use this book for fundraising to help African orphanages, I felt this was a great place to start. It was a good experience and I learned a lot.
When I decided to write more stories, I realized I needed to learn more about the publishing industry and joined a local writers group. This is when I learned how to create a dummy book, which is what every children's book author should do before submitting anything to a publisher. However, before tackling the construction of one, you should first print out your complete text and carefully go through it line by line, marking each in numerical sequence according the coordinating page number you see it going on. Then cut the lines out, being careful to keep them in order. To create a dummy book is very easy. Most children's books are 32 pages. Simply follow these easy steps: 1. Take 16 sheets of 8 1/2 by 11 paper and fold them in half to create a set of 16 pages. 2. Staple down the middle seam to secure the pages. 3. Start your title on the second page since the first page is your cover. 4. Flip that page over and write copyright page. You don't have to be fancy or detailed. 5. The next page may be your devotional page or the beginning of your story. 6. On your beginning text page, begin to paste or tape your cut out lines in order onto the coordinating pages until the end of your story. Any extra pages just leave blank. 7. Now go back and draw stick figure pictures of what you think each page scene might look like or simply write in the details if that is easier. That's all there is to it. Making a dummy book will let you know if you have enough text to actually fill up a children's picture book format. If you don't have enough text, you may need to add more to your story. If there is too much text and not enough room for pictures, you need to edit down your word count significantly or reconsider your audience age range. You might actually have a short story or the beginnings of a chapter book. Likewise, if your stick figure drawings are all too much the same and do not offer significant variety and interest, you may not have a picture book story. Either way, booking out your story is a good idea. It will help you know if your story will work in a picture book format and help you see if the text is picture book material or more for early readers. If you've ever edited a manuscript on your own, then you are fully aware of the painstaking process. In exploring the world of editing, I have come to understand there are different types and styles of editing. There are those editors who offer a full service approach, which means they include some content editing, grammar, vocabulary, sentence structure, etc. This is an all inclusive and very intense editing job, which will cost you a lot more money. How much is appropriate? Well, this can be subversive, but there are standard prices which in my view are still very high. However, you must understand the amount of time it takes to edit a manuscript at that level can be extreme. It also depends on how much in a hurry you are, as the writer, to get your edits back. It also depends on word count, number of pages, and if your manuscript needs formatting.
I have found online editorial services for 13 to 14 cents per word, and that's cheap. Many online services use a method called Track Changes, and everything is handled electronically through email exchanges. I offer my own Rock Bottom Editing on this site for only $2.00 per page using that same method, which you may want to take advantage of. Older editor's do not use computers, but prefer to print out the manuscript and use the shorthand symbols for which they can and should provide a key to you upon delivery. There are usually no second draft edits. Once you receive the edited manuscript back, it is up to you to make all the suggested corrections. You will not and should not expect a finished, completed manuscript from an editor for hire. You do the math and decide what you can afford. Is it really worth the investment? Well, if you want to be taken seriously as a writer in the publishing industry, the answer is yes. However, there are ways to get around the cost of editing. Ask your writer pals to read through the manuscript for you and mark their edits. I'm not talking about critiquing here. I'm talking about a read through for grammar mistakes and obvious issues. These 'friends' need to be objective, not your parents, your sister, your brother, or even a bestie. A writing group is really great for this type of thing, but you will need to offer them something for their time and effort. This is where a fair trade deal, the barter system, comes into play. You may need to be willing to mow a lawn, trim hedges, wash a car, offer the same reading of their work in return, or offer a free copy of your book once it is published. Be aware, your manuscript may require more than one type of edit. This is why networking with other writers online is imperative and essential to your success as a writer. These online buds are virtual pals only and basically low risk. You should take full advantage of whatever they are willing to do for you in exchange for the same effort. Content editing is equally as important to help ensure your manuscript is consistent with certain time frames, the hair and eye color stays the same with each character throughout the book, descriptions and details of certain areas, backyards, schools, parks, police stations, houses, bedrooms, living rooms, restaurants, gas stations, etc. are consistent throughout. Either way, you need to make sure you get, at the very least, a thorough basic edit before turning over your manuscript for review by any publishing house. This will save you and them a lot of time and money later. God; Semicolons; and ‘Anointed Text’ I breathed deeply. If you have a spouse or partner, you know that breathing-in. It accompanies a prayer for patience, sometimes. Other times, it’s a quiet act of passive-aggressiveness. Likely the latter, in the instance I’m thinking of. My editorial client, you see, as we walked through my edit of her first go at fiction, had just uttered these words: But God told me to put that semicolon there. Had I not moved to the American South, I’d have had no words to say about this. Southerners, however, have taught me a magnificently apt expression: Bless her heart. Writers Christian, theist, atheist and agnostic will often respond to a critique or edit with something like this (whining optional): How can you critique this—it’s my heart, it’s part of me…I’ve heard it from teens, from little old ladies, from businessmen in power suits, and once from a 275-pound ex-Navy Seal. The person whose defensiveness comes in the form of It’s my heart is simply feeling delicate. Who hasn’t? The writer whose defensiveness comes in the form of But God told me, is similarly delicate, but is also hiding behind a shield of their own manufacture. God, I’m convinced, doesn’t do semicolons. Semicolons are why He made editors. I do believe God participates—often—in the arts. He surely helped Da Vinci with Mona’s smile. You can see Him, I swear, in Edward Hopper’s astonishing canvas The Nighthawks. He helped, smilingly, with Dali’s surrealism. Helped Dante with the Inferno, Milton with Paradise Lost. The Lord showed up several times for T.S. Eliot, a bunch for Shakespeare. He was surely present when Benny Goodman cut that magnificent 1939 recording of Sing Sing Sing, with Gene Krupa’s stunning drum work, and He was there, in Joe Pass’s solo jazz guitar. It’s less than clear that He ever dictated any of these. About two years ago, a guy came to me with a “religious book.” That’s all I can say. It was eighty or ninety pages of over-the-top exhortatory preacherly text—the kind with ENDLESS CAPITAL LETTERS and a truly stunning number of multiplied EXCLAMATION POINTS!!!!!! Was I a godly man? he asked. No, I explained. I pretty much suck at that. But I am a Christian, however deeply unworthy. He thought a moment, decided he liked that answer. I could therefore be permitted to see and handle his manuscript. Were I not Christian, he explained, I’d be “of the Enemy” with a capital ‘E.’ And in such instance I couldn’t be allowed to touch it, lest it become—his word—“infected.” I was to “help” him, he said, as an editor. But I was not to change or mark anything. I asked why. “This has been dictated by God.” Straight face. I wasn’t even to mark a copy of his text. “I’m an editor,” I said. I fix things. Mark things. Question things. Critique things. Suggest better ways to put ideas. “Oh, no…” he said vaguely. “What were you thinking I’d do with your text?” I asked. Even more vaguely: “I’m not sure…” The gentleman did not become my client. I suspect he’s no one’s client. Language of the form
Consciously, writers who say these things are quite sincere, and doubtless expressing a kind of humility. It’s hubris, however, that comes across. The claim that my text—unlike all those others out there—has been perfected, pronounced immaculate by God Himself, rendered unassailable, is hard to receive as anything but misplaced pride, closely behind which stands a certain fear. Your sacred text is not sacred. It is, however, worth working on. -Bradley Harris A word from Londa: This is the last of our series on From the Editor's POV. I hope you've enjoyed it and received lots of useful information. Just a quick note on Bradley Harris. He recently suffered a life threatening infection and was hospitalized for several days. From what I understand, he is doing much better now. Your prayers for his complete recovery are much appreciated. For more about Bradley Harris, click here. To pick up a copy of his latest book, Thorazine Beach - click here. Write Fast!
Three years and change I spent in graduate school, chasing my MFA in creative writing. I had a free ride, thanks to the good people of Tennessee. But I had to work for it—mostly trying to teach ball-capped, slack-jawed Mississippi frat boys that reading is more important than beer. For all that time and effort, the smartest, most intelligent piece of writerly advice I ever received came in two plain words from a fine writing instructor, Tom Russell. You guessed it: Write fast. I won’t claim to be the king, even a prince, of writing fast. Maybe a minor knighthood, though. Consider… My first published academic paper: written the night before it was due as a term paper. First published short story: four hours for the first draft. The only play of mine that’s ever seen a stage: A morning-noon-night gush in a favourite watering hole—diet Pepsi only, folks—produced the first hundred-page draft, later polished. My two commercially published novels (Ruby Ruby, Vancouver: Anvil Press, 1999…Thorazine Beach, Anvil Press, 2013) each arose from 72-hour blitzes in the International 3-Day Novel competition, in whose 35-year history I’m the only two-time winner. My respectful submission: I’m qualified to talk about the value in writing fast. Ask any art teacher…Rank beginners, people who’ve never drawn or painted before, are reluctant to make a mark on a sketch pad page lest it be “wrong”…feel afraid to squeeze paint from the tube. “But I don’t know what to write” is the litany of those would-be writers who suffer this kind of writer’s block. Truth: I don’t know what to write, either. Ever. The words come when I start typing. When I make them come. Plenty of those who call themselves “Christian writers” have, in my perception, an exacerbated version of this block. Now, none of us Christians would deny that we have access, potentially, to a special kind of inspiration. That inspiration, we like to think, is the source of whatever virtue our writing may have. Some of us like to think of ourselves or our texts as “anointed.” Some that “God’s hand has guided” our writing. I’m with you so far. Though I’m not fond of the term Christian writer and don’t wear it myself, for reasons not here relevant, I’m a Christian and a writer, and, yes, the two are intimately connected. I, like most of those who’ll read this, I suspect, make it a practice to pray before a writing session, and often pray thanks afterward. But such beliefs and practices can get in the way. I have to be in the right spiritual frame of mind, many Christian writers tell me. I ask: How do you get there? If the answer is by praying, I generally buy that. If the answer bears the shape Well, I just kind of have to wait…I often begin to sense a certain aroma. An aroma you can associate with farms. Or, ultimately, with fear. And with excuse. Frank question…If you had to be “in the right spirit” to vacuum your living room carpet, how dirty would it be right now? If, at the office, you needed to be “in position, spiritually” before doing the accounts receivable, would they ever get done on time? And would the boss be pleased? The Boss—that one, with the capital ‘B’—would be delighted, Christian writers, if you’d just get on with it. Wrong recipe: Pray…wait…write. Better recipe: Pray…write. And fast. Bradley Harris is a Canadian writer, editor, and teacher living and working in Memphis, Tennessee. He is the only writer to have won the 3-Day Novel Contest twice - See more of this article at: http://www.3daynovel.com/tag/bradley-harris/ His current work Thorazine Beach is available at: Anvil Press. Meet Bradley Harris: Author and Editor Extraordinaire
I've been working with Mr. Harris for the past three years to help educate our local writers and to hone my own writing skills. Recently, I discovered a unique quality in this man's teaching repertoire and asked Bradley to share some of his wit and wisdom with my readers. These blog entries will be offered in a series so please come back for more. Let It Go, Already! by Bradley Harris Sixteen years. That’s how long one of my (former) clients has been “working on” her book. You’d think that would be enough time. After all, the woman worked, years ago, as a journalist for a broadcasting organization whose name you’d recognize. She knows about deadlines. Knows how to write fast, get it done. My client has lots of text—certainly a book’s worth. Pretty well-drafted text it is, too, especially considering it’s in a genre—memoir—that’s new to her. Really, though, I should be saying texts—plural. You see, my old client has in her laptop about twenty chapters, each in three or four versions, on up to—wait for it!--eighteen versions of one chapter. This is not a “mistake” in writerly method. It’s nonsense. Arguably pathological, meaning no disrespect thereby. She can’t let go. My client—Brenda, we’ll call her—received well the specific edits I suggested in the early (all different) chapters. But then I started catching déjà vu—chapters I swore I’d read before, save that she hadn’t made changes I was equally sure I’d suggested. “Different versions,” she explained. I stopped work. Told her she shouldn’t be blowing money that way. We talked about the problem, about her being afraid to discard a version of a chapter lest she lose something important or that she really wanted. Variant chapters kept building, each in a separate file. I asked finally, how many files she had. Answer: over a hundred. Blushed when she said it. She knew. I won’t spend any more of your money, I said, until you do this: Pick a version—any one, your favourite—of each chapter. Then stuff all these into a single file, and we’ll work on that. Years later, that big single file doesn’t exist. Brenda’s still “working on it.” Sometimes “thinking about it.” It is now not a book, but an agony. Your quest for the perfect book (perfect story, perfect poem, etc.) will fail. Guaranteed. Till you, as a writer, move beyond being a member of Homo sapiens, you will continue producing the imperfect, the incomplete, the less-than-it-could-have-been. Get over that. Do these things…
Query: Do you have sixteen years to wait for your next book? Bradley Harris is a Canadian writer, editor, and teacher living and working in Memphis, Tennessee. He is the only writer to have won the 3-Day Novel Contest twice - See more of this article at: http://www.3daynovel.com/tag/bradley-harris/ His current work Thorazine Beach is available at: Anvil Press. Site stats are so evasive and unpredictable. For instance, my last post was in July, but I had the most visits ever to my site in the middle of August. Go figure. I have no idea what brought that on or why the sudden surge in interest to my website, but I am happy and grateful for it.
This year, I have been so busy with family matters and going out of town almost monthly that I 've not had time to keep up my blogs the way I should . This is why I'm delightfully surprised that in spite of my unfortunate neglect, there is still interest in my blog and website content. This tells me I must be doing something right. Thank you for visiting my blog, if you are new here. Grab a cup of coffee, relax in your seat, and enjoy a good read. Let me know what you think. I appreciate your feedback. I have another blog I try to keep up for Christian Women about dating. Yes, I've been married 27 years, but that doesn't mean I can't share some tidbits of advice to women who are dating today. Things were not any easier for me even those few years back. The demands for sexual promiscuity were just as high then as they are now. The pressure to give in to peer pressure and not uphold the God's standards in your dating life are just as relevant. Feel free to visit http://datepraywait.com for more information. |
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